Hello Ian, it's Amanda from Room 9. I see your class has been learning about ANZAC Day as well! Your presentation really caught my attention, the moving flags and your background stood out. I really enjoyed reading your facts but it was a bit too hard for me to see, it's best if you could make the font bolder or change the background. Anyways, good job on your work and hopefully the advice I gave you helped you in any way.
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Hello Ian, it's Amanda from Room 9. I see your class has been learning about ANZAC Day as well! Your presentation really caught my attention, the moving flags and your background stood out. I really enjoyed reading your facts but it was a bit too hard for me to see, it's best if you could make the font bolder or change the background. Anyways, good job on your work and hopefully the advice I gave you helped you in any way.
ReplyDeleteGreat catchy title page Ian. Please look at using font colors that are easier to read.
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