Plan:Reason for
1.Because teachers don’t know about it
2.So you know your family heaps than you already do.
3.So that you can speak other languages than yours.
4.So you are fresh and early for your school. I think we should have more holidays
1.So you can catch up with old friends at old schools.
2.So you can see your family all over the globe and friends.
3.So you can go to other countries that you’ve never been to before.
4.So you can play with your friends.
Reasons why we need more holidays because you have seen your old friend s say you have been to about to 5 schools already and you want to see all of your old friends because each year you have to make new friends at new schools because I have been to 5 different schools first the edmund hillary kindergarten , then north oamaru, then waimate Centennial school, then Pembroke School and then edmund hillary school. Because if you don't go all over the globe then how do you know they really exist and really want to meet the rest of your family and cousins, and aunties and not least your uncles. Because if you don't go on a aeroplane how do I know that not every Island has been discovered and you want to go over the globe. Because you want to know your friends more and to see what they have and because you have not been over their house because your to busy at other peoples.
Conclusion I think I should add more detail to my holidays.
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