Kia Ora, My name Jordyn and I love this slide I am an absolute fan of Spirit Animals the book and I am very much impressed with your knowledge in the books, your writing is good but their is still a few things that could be fixed. The second page of information does not make sense but besides from that it is a great piece of writing.
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really good ian
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, My name Jordyn
ReplyDeleteand I love this slide I am an absolute fan of Spirit Animals the book and I am very much impressed with your knowledge in the books, your writing is good but their is still a few things that could be fixed. The second page of information does not make sense but besides from that it is a great piece of writing.
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Jordyn